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You'd never ask what I love about you and I'd never tell because silence is a thing that we do
You refuse to take things seriously, you let chance govern, you drive me insane and you cure me of the blues
I'm made of words and I think literature saves, you think that's romantic but pitiful and that some things are better left unsaid

But when the metaphors dry up and there's nothing left to save, I wish you'd learn to listen to my silence
Just as much as I wish I'd learn to read into your cascade of meaningless words that flow to cover up your tragedy, my tragedy, the void of the whole world

And maybe then I wouldn't feel like I'm just a woman walking pointlessly through your life
A woman without answers to the questions that never see the light of day, frozen, suspended in between all our inside jokes and small talk
A woman without insight, who cannot pull you from your past when you fall back into it
And, most of all, a woman without closure, who never learned to say good bye and could never be taught what full stops are good for
©2008-2009 ~AndreeaDoria
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Author's Comments

The feelings are old, the writing is new...if it's going to seem to you that this poem is made up of bits and pieces, that's because it is :P. It's made up of different writing exercises that I've compelled myself to do...but until now I hadn't realized who or what they were about.
Enjoy!

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:iconkain78:
Briliant!! That's the probably the best thing I've read from you so far! It should be used for a song: the verses already sound musical and harmonious!
Well done my dear :thumbsup:
:iconandreeadoria:
Wow...thank you...I wasn't expecting such a reaction on this particular piece, since it was more an exercise than anything else. Thanks for your encouragement...and for your promptitude :)

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fuck literature, let's dance
:iconananeamu:
superb andreea...omg i`m so hpy that you are my cousin...
t iubesc fata>:D<
esti speciala...:love:

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A.Einstein

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:iconandreeadoria:
wow...thanks...love you too *hug*. Thanks for your neverending support. God knows I need it :D.

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fuck literature, let's dance
:iconananeamu:
kiar imi palce ce scrii ji cum scrii....si deji eu zic k mereu esti pesimista in ce scrii pana la urma vine din suflet ji este important...sentimentle tale isi lasa amprenta asupra scrierii ji este mai deep asa :p

:hug:

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______________________________________
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one.."
A.Einstein

check out my other account [link]
:iconandreeadoria:
much appreciated :)

--
fuck literature, let's dance
:iconananeamu:
:love:

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______________________________________
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one.."
A.Einstein

check out my other account [link]
:iconaprilmood:
an amazing mixture of 'whos' and 'whats ' and 'bits and pieces'...charmed
:iconandreeadoria:
Thanks hun...actually you know the bits and pieces from our poetry nights. Je t'embrasse :*

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fuck literature, let's dance

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